Week 3 Story : Willy Wonkas Tourmentor
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One early morning in the Chocolate Factory, Willy Wonka was brushing his teeth with mint chocolate tooth paste when his sister, Sierra ran the bathroom in complete fear!
One early morning in the Chocolate Factory, Willy Wonka was brushing his teeth with mint chocolate tooth paste when his sister, Sierra ran the bathroom in complete fear!
She cries, "The Father of the Cream of Chocolate family over yonder slashed the tires on my chocolate-mobile! Im terrified of what they may do next!"
"What is the Father's name?" asked Willy.
"His name is Omega, but brother wait, he has a voluptuous beautiful wife that oozes out white chocolate at the top of every hour her name is Reye, the Queen of White Chocolate."
"Oh, heavenly does she sound, I need her in my life! Tell me more." Willie Wonka inquires and forgets about the damage done to his sisters car.
Sierra becomes filled with excitement when she realizes her manipulating plan is working! She begins to elaborate on Reye's voluptous curves that oozes white chocolate and her beautiful red hair down to her waist. The dazzling eyes of Reye captured all of my attention, Sierra said in admiration. I know she would be perfect for you.
The thought of Reye began to over come Willie and he could not stop thing about how beautiful she is. Everything in his world stopped! The love of his life became a shadow in the presence of the Queen of White Chocolate.
Willy Wonka contemplated for a few days about shutting down the Chocolate Factory so he could go on his quest to find Reye. He had to take into consideration the shortage of chocolate that would be in the city. However, that didn't matter to him. He shut the factory down and went to his second home to prepare for his quest.
Tossing and turning throughout the night he grew anxious to find Reye. He searched high and low through the valley, until he reached the house over yonder where Reye resided. Prepared to fight her husband Omega for her heart, he steps on their property and Omega instantly smell the residue of milk chocolate and looks out the front window and sees Willy Wonka.
Omega yells, "leave my property now or I will shoot my fire gun."
Determined to get to Reye, Willy Wonka runs forth and gets struck down by his gun. As the fire scorched his skin he ran towards the pond of white chocolate and jumped in to escape the fire. He then swam through the pipes of the pond to reach Reye. Willie Wonka approached Reye in amazement in her powder room.
What brings you here Willy? asks Reye.
Dazed by her beauty he said, My beautiful White Chocolate Queen come with me, I will live my life in the dark for the sake of you and me. I need you in my life and I will stay by your side the rest of your life.
How delightful you sound, I have been waiting for you! said Reye.
They swam through the pipes full of liquid white chocolate and escaped, Happily ever after!
Author's Note: This week, while reading Narayans Ramayana I found chapter five the most interesting and I wanted to rewrite the story in a fun way. I was amazed at Ravana's determination to find Sita. So, I recreated it with Willy Wonka. Ravana could not defeat Rama but still managed to take the Sita. He still managed to take her by defeating Jatyu.
Image information: Chocolate Factory
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Bibliography: Narayan's Ramayana https://read.amazon.com/?asin=B000S1LC7Q
Hi Taylor! This was a really great and creative retelling of the story that you did! I've always loved Willy Wonka so reading a version with Willy Wonka in it was extremely enjoyable. I was curious, where exactly did the queen ooze chocolate from? Either way it sounded delicious, haha. Anytime chocolate is mentioned I love it because chocolate is pretty much my favorite food group. Also, did Willy Wonka shut down his factory of producing chocolate for the world just to be with the love of his life? That would be sad for everyone who loves chocolate as much as I do! Either way, I'm happy that they got to live happily ever after, I just hope that doesn't mean a chocolate shortage for their love. I really liked how this is how you had Rama rescue Sita. You should do a follow up on this story or continue with the Willy Wonka theme because it could be really interesting.
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ReplyDeleteYour story was really enjoyable and easy to read. This was such a unique way to change this story, and something I would have never thought to do myself! You have definitely given me and the other students something new to think about when we do our next story! I actually ended up reading the original story as well as the author's note to get the full effect on what you had been working with. Great job!
Taylor,
ReplyDeleteI really like your story based around willy wonka and the chocolate factory. I have done my project over Rama, Sita, and Ravana and I love how this story is set up. I think this is a great way to rewrite the story in a fun and interesting way. I think it is also funny how you used different names for the characters. This is a great story and love your writing over this.
I think it is interesting how your story is unique from both of the source materials you used. It feels very original and I think that that helps it a lot. I also find it interesting how even though the original telling of the tale was somewhat darker, you chose to go with a happier ending. I like it.
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