Week 8 Comments and Feedback

1) As I looked back on my comment blog page and my feedback, the criticism that I have receive up until this point has been great and constructive. Some of the students helped me see something in my stories that I didn't see.

2) I would rate the feedback that I give an 8 out of 10. I say this because I always try not to be overly opinionated with my responses. I like to be mindful of everyone's creativity.  However, I do like to give different outlooks on what they write about and also new ideas.

3) When I do leave comments and read my classmates introductions I do feel like I connect with my classmates. Everyone has told great stories about what they like and their hobbies. I am happy about my introduction! I explained everything that I love and my hobbies. It is interesting to see who have the same interests and hobbies.

4) The improvements that I can make on giving feed back is reading more stories outside of this class. Sometimes, I find myself speechless. I think it is because this is my first time critiquing others writing. As the semester progress I am improving.

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I chose this picture because anytime you get constructive feedback. You always have to try harder! There is always room for improvement. 


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